The sheet of sky was tucked with millions of stars today. "Daddy", his 6 years daughter called him. "Yes dear"? He replied. "Why people say that mom is the love of your life "? She asked. He smiled to her curious eyes and his eyes traced to the path towards a big beautiful star , he slowly closes his eyes,and his thoughts were drawn to the lanes of once upon a time .. he could see a solid woman with a pure heart smiling to him ; whose beauty is reflecting through moonlight .A woman who is a clear dreamer and a strong will ; whose cares cures a tensed , her dimples were so sharp that is making him weekend to knees ,he could smell a scented air she always wears.A mere presence of a pure bliss. He is sensing an alarm , it looks like now silver lights of moon is fading and hiding through rolling clouds and fog is raising fencing between us to cover everything as a blanket. "Why are you sleeping Daddy"? "Answer me" ! The chain of thoughts were broken suddenly to the reality. Tears rolled through the corner of his eyes unknowingly . "Daddy why are you crying" ? "No sweety", I was thanking to God for such a wonderful daughter; he cuped his hand to bear her face and looking into her big round eyes he said, "You know why mommy is the love of my life "? Cause she is that God , who gifted me a bundle of joy wrapped in white that's you. "Then why she left us" ? She said "She never left us, she is within you, forever with us",he said. A smile got painted through her face ,she giggled and tip toe onto his lap , curling herself into a ball . He hugged her and gave a goodnight kiss to her.Looking above the sky, he mumbled "She is just like you a little curious and impatient; "God " I miss you !
Inspiring written, keep up your work, thanks for writting
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DeleteBeing a Dad i can imagine how beautiful the dad daughter conversation is..
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Reading this makes me feel sad, but I also can't deny that there is sooo much love on this post. Kind of reminds me of Nicholas Sparks' works. I love his works which means I loved this, too! ❤️
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DeleteBeautiful story... Anyone who has lost a mother can relate... She is still within us....��
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Very poetic post. Great job on drawing us in with your writing.
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DeleteOh what a sweet story! So sad but so beautiful too!
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DeleteThis was really good. Loving it! And a nice choices of words. ☺
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ReplyDeleteYou know u again writes so well touched to ♥... Keep writing...
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ReplyDeleteRoshniji aap bht achha likhti hai …touched to our real life and emotions…
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ReplyDeletebeautifully written - my dad passed away 7 years ago so this makes me think of him!
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DeleteTruly said .... to whom we love the most they seems like god if we lose them. We always miss them...
ReplyDeleteEach and every line nicely written with lot of emotions... It's a pleasure to see such a beautiful post well done.. Keep writing...
Its a pleasure to have your kind words too...thanku
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ReplyDeleteBeautifully writes with lot of emotions in your post if someone is love of our life and when we lose them we always miss them like god...
Interesting stuff to read.
Great post. This feeling Couldn’t be write much better!!!
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ReplyDeleteVery touching and yet emotional too.
Beautifully written with lots of deep thinking.
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DeleteNice, short and beautiful story. GOD lives in us.
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DeleteHii Roshni
ReplyDeleteThis blogs really contains alot of emotions and yes we really miss if we lose love of life and their is also a touching talk between father & daughter .Loved to read.
“Interesting post! Thanks for writing it.”
Thanks katherine
DeleteHii Roshni
ReplyDeleteYours every blog is touching.
This post is sad but beautifully written and too emotional. Really feel emotional after reading every bit of it.Touching felling and lovely talk between kids and father.
And wishing in real life no one miss anyone like that bcse it really hurts.
Thank you for writing and sharing such a emotional and touching story.
Keep writing and sharing !!!!
Thanks Victoria for the lovely response .
DeleteHiii Roshni
ReplyDeleteYou know you write this blog very beautifully .Its consist of everything feelings of love, emotions and a very very touching conversation between daughter and her father and blog have inspiration too.
How a man losing love of his life and lives his life for the shake of daughter.. It's a great a inspiration for youngsters who loses his consciousness after any tragedy.
And truly said we miss alot even like God if we lose anyone special from our life but we have to try to live happily for the happiness of others who live for us. It's a life.
A great emotional and touching writing ,love to read it.Thanks for writing it .
"Keep writing and Keep sharing ".
You write damn good with a great art of writing ...
Thanks for the great response Kevin !
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ReplyDeleteYup ...truly said whatever happens to our life but what we feel for someone special never changed. They are always very special for us close to our life and if we lose them we miss them alot.
Beautifully written and talk between daughter and her father very heart touching and emotional too.
Great post...
Thank u for writing such a good blog.
Keep writing and sharing !!!
Good evening!Nicholas thanku for your words .will defines tly going to share more..check for the the updates in future.Lovely response
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ReplyDeleteHello Roshni
This blog is very emotional and coversation between father and her daughter is very touching .
And this question
Why people say that mom is the love of your life?
touches my heart and makes me emotional too and touches anyone for whom someone is very very special for his life who sees everything of life into her ,who can't imagine his life without her, who sees her as god of his life...
Very touching blog and written very very emotionally.
Keep writing and sharing!!!!
And wishing you a very Happy Diwali enjoy it with yours family with lots of Happy moments...
And Thanks for sharing such a emotional ,touching and spiritual story.
Thank you so much Emily .
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ReplyDeleteIt's a pleasure to read such a heart touching and emotional blog. And a very touching conversation between father and daughter too..
Very well written a heart touching blog.
And also wishing here a very happy Diwali to you and family celebrate it with lots of Happy moments that a brings a joy through out the year.
Thank u so much for sharing such a emotional blog.
Keep writing and sharing :))
Thanks for the wishes ...Kennedy :)
DeleteYou know you really write very beautifully its really touched our feelings and emotions.
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Please keep writing...
Hiii Roshni
ReplyDeleteThis blog is very beautifully very emotionally written .Its really touches my feelings, my emotions my soul too.
Conversation between daughter and father very heart touching and lovely. It's a pleasure to read such a emotional blog after a long time.
And I wish in real life no one loses anyone who loves someone like that and who sees everything of his life in her happiness ,who respect her alot see her like his god...
Truly very emotional and heart touching blog.Loved to read it.
Thanks for sharing... Keep writing and keep sharing!!!!
Thanks for reading beatriz.thanks for your words
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ReplyDeleteBeautifully written emotions and feelings of love. Feeling emotional after reading this Conversation is full of emotions..
Thanks for sharing such a emotional blog...I am really touched by yours blog.
Keep on writing !!!!
Hi Amanda...
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Yours every blogs are very inspirational and every blogs written very beautifully .
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ReplyDeleteA very good evening to you.
Its a nice to see yours a very blog here.Yours every blog is very beautifully written with lots of heart touching ,emotional and inspirational word. The way you write yours blog , its seems you give life to yours world ,connect us to the real world.
And this blog is written very beautifully ,with full of emotions.Reading conversation between father and daughter makes me too emotional ,a very heart touching conversation.
And yes if someone is really very important to our life, and we love them alot and when we lose them then we really miss them alot like ours God.
You know you really write very beautifully each and every line of yours blog ....
So please keep on writing and share with us and makes us feel good.
And thanks for sharing such a good blog with us.
Very much thankful to you. Watch this space for future updates
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ReplyDeleteVery touching blog.After reading this it's make me emotional too.
Very beautifully written with lots of heart touching word, you seems to be a virtuoso in writing.
Thanks for writing and sharing with us.
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Hi ! Macro
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Be in touch to this blog.
Very emotional and really touched my emotions too.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written and shows yours Great thinking.And yes losing some one hurts and makes us miss them alot.
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DeleteVery heart touching and inspirational too .Loved to read it I think you really write very emotionally with deep thinking.
ReplyDeleteAnd wishing here who loves someone like his god never loses her because missing someone really hurts.
Thanks for writing and sharing such a heart touching blog With us.
Hi adelina
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This blog is also very beautifully written. It's really touches my feelings too. Now a days it's really hard to see a people who loves someone like that, like his god.
ReplyDeleteVery emotional and conversation is very heart touching.
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DeleteVery beautifully written consisting everything emotions, love,inspirations .
ReplyDeleteIt's very heart touching and Amazing blog .Loved to read it.
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DeleteFull of emotions. Lovely story.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful And Heart touching and wishing noone loses anyone who loves someone like that.
ReplyDeleteLovely Blog with full of emotions....
Writing with full of emotions and it's too lovely and heart touching.
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DeleteIt's beautifully written too written very emotionally. And Wishing everyone who loves someone like that ,lived very very long life together, never loses them.
ReplyDeleteAnd lovely talk between father and daughter.
Beautiful blog.
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Very heart touching and wishing everyone gets loving person like that in his/her life.
ReplyDeleteWho alwys respect them, feel her as his life, want to live for her,for her dreams and treat them like his god and wishing they spend very long life together and never miss each other.
It's very beautifully written... Very impressive and too emotional.... Lovely...
Thanx David !
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It's too beautiful. I wish everyone understands this feeling of love by someone. Lovely and too emotional...
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Very emotional and heart touching conversation.
ReplyDeleteAnd wishing noone in his life miss anyone like that it's really hurts and One who loves,cares, and respect someone like that always been together forever and spend very very long life together with full of happiness....
Beautifully written... Loved it too.
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DeleteVery Beautifully written and too emotional.
ReplyDeleteWishing everyone gets Life Partner like him who loves her alot, who respect alot, who sees his life, his God in her and they live together Happily and never miss each other .I wish I get guy in my life like that...
Very impressive,touching and lovely.... Loved it.
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DeleteTruly very heart touching...and wishing the way he loves her, like that everyone get a Guy in her life,Its make whole life Amazing and too beautiful.
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DeleteAwesome piece of writing.Very emotional loved to read it.
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It's very touching and I wish no one miss anyone like that and the one who really loves someone feels this feeling that even we live far away from them then also we feel how is she, miss her alot, think of her wellness only every time and respect her a lot ,wishing she is always in good health with happiness and smile,wnt to talk her, here her voice.
ReplyDeleteTruly said if we love her truly then she is always seems like god, always be an inspiration of our life. I wish everyone understand this feeling of love as u mentioned in your blog. Love is life which gives positive Hope always.
It's too heart touching and Yup when we love someone truly we miss them a lot even when they are out of sight and yes but they are always near to us, we feel them in our thoughts ,they always guide for the best of our life's. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteVery Emotional and Yes love makes our life's always beautiful and losing such a person from our lifes makes us miss them alot which can't be expressed and explain in words!!!!
ReplyDeleteI wish none of them in his lifes loses love of his life. Too heart touching...
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ReplyDeleteLovely one.
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ReplyDeleteThis is totally heart touching I love how u shows a Great feeling no matter what you always have to be kind and take care of your family I love the end whatmay happens to ours life we have try to see the life in far better way, to make its beautiful and always say thanks for the past.
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ReplyDeleteTruly said in your article we not miss anyone by chance , if we miss someone like that then it's really means she is so special in our life's, and we love them a lot what may happen to our life. And wishing they will be always happy and smiling at every moment of our life.
Very emotional too heart touching.
You are really amazing and inspiring. It's really very touching Article.. I also miss love of my life alot..U know she is the most beautiful, most talented girl who cares every one alot... She is Angel on the earth.. I always wish wherever she now happy, smiling and in Gd health always.
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